Tum na samjhe the baat itni si,
Tumhari aas rahe har pal ye khwaish thi kitni si.
Is aas ke saaye me beette the pal,
Umeed ki dor se bandha tha har kal.
Kachchi thi wo dor use tootna hi tha,
Age jo badi chali manzil to hame peecha chootna hi tha.
Kal ki wo sunehri patang kho gayi kuch aise,
Sagar se chin gaya ho uska kinaara jaise.
Raahein hain anjaan,bas manzil hi nahi hai,
Lehron ka rukh kahin hai aur sahil kahin hai.
Baatein hai unginat, par shabd nahi hain,
Har pal hai soona , fir bhi waqt nahi hai.
Na hi hai koi aas aur na hi bacha koi haq,
Na vishwaas ka nishaan or na hi koi shaq.
Hans rahe hain hum par aankhen hai nam,
Anjaan se lamhon me nishabd se hain hum.
Wo samete hue lamhe,wo pyari yadein sab choot rahein hain,
Gaanthon se bhare vishwaas ke dhaage ab toot rahein hain.
Wo apne se lamhe ho rahe hai paraye saare,
Itni door tak a gaye the hum fir bhi hain hare…..
3 comments:
Hi
Good attempt to portray the thoughts into poem. Its great and looks how deeply you have thought of. Really amazing work. Some lines are really thoughtful like
Baatein hai unginat, par shabd nahi hain,
Har pal hai soona, fir bhi waqt nahi hai.
Really true. Sometimes you have so much thoughts, feelings, talks, opinions in your mind but either u don’t find the words to express or the time is not there with you.
I think u just carved the thoughts into the poem. I have tried to rearrange these beautiful words. Sorry for taking this liberty.
Find below my edited version…and once again sorry if hurt your feelings but I didn’t change even a single word from your thoughts. I have just tried to knit into poem….
Tum na samjhe the baat itni si,
Tumhari aarzoo ki khwaish thi kitni si.
Is aas ke saaye me beeta the har pal,
Umeed ki dor se bandha tha har kal.
Kachchi thi wo dor ushe tootna hi tha,
manzil se peeche hamein chootna hi tha.
Kal ki wo sunehri patang kuch kho gayi aise,
Sagar se kahi gum ho gaya ho kinaara jaise.
Raahein hain anjaan,aur manzil ki kami hai,
Lehron ka rukh kahin hai aur sahil kahin hai.
Baatein hai unginat, par shabd hi nahi hain,
Har pal hai soona soona, fir bhi waqt ki kami hai.
Na hein koi aas aur na hi bacha koi haq hein
Na vishwaas ka nishaan or na hi koi shaq hein
Aankhen hein nam par labo pe hassi hein
Anjaan se lamhon mein khamoshi chuppi hein
Wo samete hue lamhe,wo pyari yadein sab choot rahein hain,
Gaanthon se bhare vishwaas ke dhaage ab toot rahein hain.
Wo apne se lamhe ho rahe hai paraye saare,
Itni door tak aa gaye the hum fir bhi hain hare….
hey..thanks..:)
and no issues...:)
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